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Deserted In Hell
Contributed by
AchingSoul
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Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 04:57:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Deserted on this island- I am.
In this island of misery and disbelief.
This island of loneliness.
This island of death.
Whenever I close my eyes-I find myself here.
In this cold an lonely island.
Island of torture.
Island of fear...
In Hell.
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AchingSoul
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2008-07-23 04:57:42]
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Re: Deserted In Hell
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by brew on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 06:46:04 AM AEST
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WOW.... lots of deep turmoil in those words. Well written, lets hope things go differently for you and the inner soul your searching for.
brew~ |
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Re: Deserted In Hell
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by eeeitak on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 08:56:37 AM AEST
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| even though its short, you fit a lot of emotion in here! its dark, and i love it. great job!!! |
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Re: Deserted In Hell
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 10:42:18 AM AEST
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Dang is so sad, well written though.
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Re: Deserted In Hell
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by tres_estrellas on
Monday, 17th November 2008 @ 06:38:46 AM AEST
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| Sounds very lonely. Sad, but beautiful. |
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