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Wonderland
Contributed by
eeeitak
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Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 09:08:01 AM in AEST
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I dont think I belong here
The sensible people dont make sense to me
Ive always wondered how understanding things could be
I dont see the same things everybody else sees
I feel lost when Im found, and found when Im lost
Id love to be among chaos, at any cost
Take my hand
Lead me to Wonderland
I want to get lost down the rabbit hole
Take my hand
Take me to Wonderland
I cant be me in a world where I cant seem to see who me really is
Can you see who you are? Is it who youd like to be?
I fear what Ill find when I finally see
But maybe it wont seem so bad in a world where
Everything is topsy-turvy
I dont think I belong here
Take my hand
Lead me to Wonderland
I want to get lost down the rabbit hole
Take my hand
Take me to Wonderland
Now we can't be late, go as fast as you can!
I wish to be in Wonderland, I wish to lose my head
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eeeitak
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2008-07-23 09:08:01]
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Re: Wonderland
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 10:16:07 AM AEST
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wonderland is a good place to be...
nice write,
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Re: Wonderland
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 10:47:28 AM AEST
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It does sound like a nice place to be.
This reminds me of something else too just cannot put a finger on it right now.......
Nicely done.
ALice would be pleased Smiles
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Re: Wonderland
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 03:38:26 PM AEST
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" I don’t think I belong here
The sensible people don’t
make sense to me" . . .
Wow, this line is remarkable,
as is the whole poem, as was
the tittle, and i read it over and
over realizing i've discovered
another treasure on this site,
deep meaningful, compelling
to the imagination as is the
very style, in which you present
it with . . .
thank you for your read also and
most gracious comment, it is
much appreciated . . .
Ben
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Re: Wonderland
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by Muinanyere on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 11:08:44 AM AEST
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| This is wonderful, I wish we all could live in our own little worlds and be who we really wanted to be. |
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Re: Wonderland
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd August 2008 @ 04:35:12 AM AEST
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| This is awesome, I loved every line! The last one especially, "...I wish to lose my head." I struggle with knowing who I truly am sometimes, I think a lot of people do, which is why this poem is terrific. |
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