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Fireflies
Contributed by
wheels
on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 11:25:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The moon is exceptionally clear
As it casts an exquisite shawl
Of blue across the lake
With a silken sheen
Upon everything that seems
Clearer than reality ever was.
Angles, and curves, and rounded pebbles
So deep and vivid and blue
With orange shadows flickering
Life and time
Sparks flirting with nearby fireflies
But scorned upon their touch.
A moment of love and content
And fear and pain
A moment so beautiful
Can hurt so
Within the fear of the coming day
When this will be in past.
But for now
Sparks burn for brief pleasure
Flying up to face
The fireflies path
With orange shadows flickering
Life and time to ashes.
Copyright ©
wheels
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2008-07-23 11:25:21]
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Re: Fireflies
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by eeeitak on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 11:36:04 AM AEST
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| oh i love this. your word choice, throughout the whole thing, is really perfect. it flows very nicely-- this is an overall incredible write!! |
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Re: Fireflies
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2008 @ 12:21:07 PM AEST
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nicely done,
good imagery and flow...
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Re: Fireflies
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by Crow on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 12:37:07 AM AEST
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my god wheels"...we could be bitter enemies
it would be a safe bet I`m reading you. you inspire, entice, enchant the reader..great work. Crow |
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Re: Fireflies
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by shelby on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 10:18:00 AM AEST
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Oh this is beautiful Kevin, I love the fireflies . I am enticed........ whoooooooooooooooo hoooooo
hugs
Michelle |
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