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Crow
Contributed by
wheels
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Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 11:30:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Walking in the darkness Smokes his cigarette Burning in the madness Hell come and find you yet.
Hear footsteps wicked echo Open up the door Nothing but a shadow A shadow nothing more.
Rushing to your window Just to see a mist But not a coolness in it Theres tobacco strung in this.
The pavement speaks his tale Message in the dark His wings are but a whisper Mocking you so stark.
Whips you with his leather Ties you with his chains Place you in the graveyard Spilling out your veins.
But he has a madness A melancholy glee To those without an evil Gifts his laugh to thee.
For Crow hope you like it.
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wheels
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2008-07-24 11:30:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Crow
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 11:59:50 AM AEST (User
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OMG Kevin,
I will tell you right now he is gonna love this!
Incredible write........... He is gonna smile as wide as I am. You rock!
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Re: Crow
(User Rating: 1 ) by wizard on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 12:45:46 PM AEST (User
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very nice,
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Re: Crow
(User Rating: 1 ) by NoSaint on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 12:50:26 PM AEST (User
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This is great he will really enjoy this I can hear his laughter now very well written
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Re: Crow
(User Rating: 1 ) by Crow on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 12:53:20 AM AEST (User
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thank you Wheels! you don`t know how close you really came...lol! I do like this.
Look for Me in the Boneyards" lol! thanks again. Crow |
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Re: Crow
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 12:29:02 PM AEST (User
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LOL.... this made me laugh.. I can only imagine the meaning behind this... but it's really nice...
Jenni |
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