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Perfection
Contributed by
Amicus
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Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 03:53:23 PM in AEST
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No one understands
My double edged soul
No one sees
As you drift back into my shadows
Slowly cut out the filth
No one needs to see my flaws
Always changing, always there
But no one seems to be aware
Slowly fix all my problems
It isn't the real me
No need to cause a fuss
Just slip out of my pocket
And let your edge shine
Don't involve yourself with me
There is no problem here
Once you leave, I'll fix it myself
With the one thing that is mine
It does not judge
Nor does it blame
It simply fixes
Like a nail ready to be hammered
It has no regrets
Slowly cut out the filth
No one needs to see my flaws
Always changing, always there
But no one seems to be aware
I need nothing
Because soon I'll be complete
Once it's all on the floor
Surround my now perfect body
Warm, sticky, perfection
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Amicus
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2008-07-24 15:53:23]
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Re: Perfection
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by eeeitak on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 05:10:26 PM AEST
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| this is so cool! i especially love the repetition of the second stanza. great, great write! |
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Re: Perfection
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 12:52:35 PM AEST
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| I'm not sure if my mind is in the gutter, but this seems to have quite the double entendre! |
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