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Trace
Contributed by
elle
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Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 01:13:36 AM in AEST
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I can not love without you.
it would be too grievious.
your little eyes, stained
into rememberance. . .
every wind blown blue sky,
every breeze sings your praise.
oh, fickle ear, you have my heart.
I strain to hear, again
a sound of you. . . in any way.
where have you gone?
can I come, too?
is this all I have of you?
Copyright ©
elle
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2008-07-25 01:13:36]
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Re: Trace
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by eeeitak on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 03:45:27 AM AEST
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| this is beautiful. its classic, and emotional. i love it! |
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Re: Trace
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 06:09:58 AM AEST
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Someone has captured your thoughts and is on the run. Great write Elle.
Deadwriter
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Re: Trace
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 01:18:21 PM AEST
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Hang in there...you will have more of your love soon enough...Good write..
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Re: Trace
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by Spike on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 11:10:55 PM AEST
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elle, a superb ending to the vagaries of word and emotion that preceded it. The remembrance just never seems enough, does it?
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Re: Trace
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by ZiggyB on
Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 06:29:54 AM AEST
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To long for your love.
This is beautiful.
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Re: Trace
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th December 2008 @ 10:02:06 AM AEST
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a beautiful poem.
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