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Would You Love Me?
Contributed by
KismetsPoet
on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 11:28:05 AM in AEST
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If I were a blond,
My waist a size 2,
Would you love me
As I love you?
If my breasts were D's,
If my eyes were blue,
Would you love me
As lovers do?
If my head was empty,
If my legs were loose,
If I wore crop-tops
And high high-heeled shoes,
Kept my answers simple,
My interests, just you,
Would you love me
And keep me
And never, ever leave me?
And, though I'd hate me,
I know I'd love you.
Just, please, would you love me, too?
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Re: Would You Love Me?
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by Muinanyere on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 11:36:25 AM AEST
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| I have been there too, I hope that he does love you but for who you are. |
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Re: Would You Love Me?
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by Spike on
Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 11:01:34 PM AEST
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Nicely expressed. Still don't know why women suffer over shallow manks (male scanks) and crave their love and acceptance. Go figure. Beauty is only skin deep, but poor self-esteem seems to go right to the bone.
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Re: Would You Love Me?
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by ZiggyB on
Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 06:10:51 AM AEST
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It's up to you to use your own heart...
and not so much your eyes.
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Re: Would You Love Me?
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by wheels on
Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 09:29:38 AM AEST
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I love the simplicity and flow of htis poem. The sincerity in the plead for love. Yes would you love me as I would you. Unfortunately we both know the answer - we have both been there.
A very nice poem.
kevin
--the lonely vagabond |
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