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Waiting In Rejection
Contributed by
PoeTom
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Saturday, 26th July 2008 @ 10:01:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Open your eyes to see me standing
I'm here waiting for you.
Each passing moment you turn away
My heart tears in to
Everyday I mend the pieces
Never to truly know
Will all of this unbearable pain and rejection
Ever cause my heart to blow
I know you'll find someone else
And sadly all I can do is mope
But still the only thing keeping me from hate
Is that little spark of hope
I'm here waiting can't you see
And you know I'll never leave
So save me the waste of my emotion for you
Please aid me not to grieve
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PoeTom
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2008-07-26 10:01:51]
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Re: Waiting In Rejection
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by lostrelic on
Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 02:09:53 AM AEST
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the rhyme is good but the words you speak are more damaging i hope you understand that love is every where and if one girl does not give you the attention you want hang your head low for a bit then walk on time is to short to have anger
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