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Night Lights Life Lights
Contributed by
wheels
on
Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 07:06:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Night Lights / Life Lights
Lights Flashing
Stainless steel
Gold
Blue
Yellow
And green.
Window
Mirror
Night time stars
Colored Cars.
See the stars
Headlights
Bug lights
Nightlights shining
Red & Blue
A purple hue.
Teardrop
Feardrop
Oh, what to do?
Green
Obscene
Obscenity
The crowd.
Clouds
Mists
Water vapors fist
White
To gray
Today
Everyday
Tonight
The same
Too dark
So stark
Black
No stars
To bid adew.
Copyright ©
wheels
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2008-07-27 07:06:58]
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Re: Night Lights Life Lights
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 07:39:35 AM AEST
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I like these kind of stark writes
Shari |
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Re: Night Lights Life Lights
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by shelby on
Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 07:40:32 AM AEST
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Kevin I see what you mean. I liked it. Loved the images it brought while reading too.
hugs
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Re: Night Lights Life Lights
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 12:57:37 PM AEST
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Well executed!! I am yet to try a 'line poem'
Perhaps I will some day.
Thank you for the inspiration...
Jenni |
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Re: Night Lights Life Lights
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by Crow on
Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 01:20:57 PM AEST
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| wheels this is great! but i`m more inclined to the earthy writes you do, Crow |
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Re: Night Lights Life Lights
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th July 2008 @ 11:44:02 AM AEST
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Very catchy Kevin.
The imagery is awesome
.......Mike |
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Re: Night Lights Life Lights
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 03:20:58 AM AEST
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A wonder of life and all her colours. I love how you gave emotion
and character to each one. Like a virtual rainbow of sentiment ...
joy, love, sorrow, anger, anxiety ... it is endless, the emotions
we can attach to colour and life in general.
Lovely work, my friend. Very provocative and intriguing.
~ Breezy
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