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Innocent Fear
Contributed by
Cayleigh-Chan
on
Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 02:19:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Shadows Dance Along The Wall,
A Morbid Party For One And All.
A Childs Fear Manifests,
In Spite...
Of The Dark, Cold, Innocent Night.
Round and, and Round, Their Immagination Goes.
Where it stops,
Nobody knows...
Footsteps Creak Along The Floor,
A Monster Knocking At Their Bedroom Door.
Mommys Comforting blanket Wont Work Anymore.
Heart Beat Rising, and Eyes Closing...
A Silent Scream Builds Up Within Their Very Core.
Copyright ©
Cayleigh-Chan
... [
2008-07-27 14:19:59]
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Re: Innocent Fear
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 02:37:55 PM AEST
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Wow..this really brought those fears to life!!
Good write. Looking forward to more of your work..
Welcome to YPDC...
Jenni |
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Re: Innocent Fear
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by beautiful_letdowns on
Monday, 28th July 2008 @ 01:59:47 AM AEST
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| DANG! Best poem I've seen on the site for a long time.... I loved it, it just flowed, it has edge, and it is powerfully written! My favorite part was "Mommys comforting blanket wont work anymore". Thanks for posting and I'm going to be sure to check out more of your work! |
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Re: Innocent Fear
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by Ruby2sdy on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 09:54:38 AM AEST
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I enjoyed reading this, I liked the play on childhood cliches, slightly creepy, thanks for posting!
2sdy xxx |
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