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Lies (Lack of Comprehension - Remix)
Contributed by
xnoybis
on
Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 04:42:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The fear of
What can not
Be understood
In the confines
Of a simple mind
A lashing out
To shadow
The weaknesses that
Dwell within
Lies
The product
of the guilt
and pain forged as a weapon
To strike out
at those that had no part
Hungry for the feeling
Of feeling justified
In being right
Despite your
Lies
The self hatred
That drives your being
Serves as an excuse
To drive anyone
Not like you down
It comes so easy
The blame that diverts
Your fear of the unknown
Lies
The prices paid
The damage done
For your lack
Of comprehension
Chuck - 12.13.01
Copyright ©
xnoybis
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2008-07-27 16:42:12]
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Re: Lies (Lack of Comprehension - Remix)
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by beautiful_letdowns on
Monday, 28th July 2008 @ 02:35:19 AM AEST
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| This one was so well written it was like a punch to the solar plexus... I loved it! It was edgy, and defined, and definately took some thought.. thanks for posting! |
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Re: Lies (Lack of Comprehension - Remix)
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by Ruby2sdy on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 10:04:04 AM AEST
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Reminded me of plenty of people I've met on this little planet, a great write, thanks,
2sdy xxx |
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