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Bowling in Heaven
Contributed by
daniella
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Monday, 28th July 2008 @ 12:59:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Theyre bowling in heaven Says the sky today Open bar Everywhere Shes in her metacognitive state Shes thinking of thinking of you Beneath each umbrella She expects to see you there With your slow Easy smile And your steady, laughing stare Gaining wisdom from every truth Even when the truth seems so unfair
Not that youd recognize her anyway Since she would never let you Not that shed recognize you anyway Since shes never even met you
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daniella
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2008-07-28 12:59:47] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Bowling in Heaven
(User Rating: 1 ) by wizard on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 12:21:09 AM AEST (User
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awesome write,
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Re: Bowling in Heaven
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ruby2sdy on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 09:41:59 AM AEST (User
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Very melancholy and well written, thanks for sharing, such a sweet sentiment,
2sdy xxx |
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