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Ride
Contributed by
Dante
on
Monday, 28th July 2008 @ 11:47:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I am being bombarded
And I have no shelter
They’re everywhere
No escape from the welter
It started innocently
Listen, Let me tell you
About what I made
I promise it’s true
Now they own it all
No escape from them
You have no idea
About the carats in this gem
Where to run?
Where to hide?
Listen to me
Just ride
Ride, until you can
Can see the hills
Then ride some more
Away from the bills
And stay until they
They take that too
Then ride again
To someplace new
Copyright ©
Dante
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2008-07-28 23:47:18]
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Re: Ride
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 12:30:58 AM AEST
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awesome write,
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Re: Ride
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by texasw97 on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 02:38:58 AM AEST
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| This was a nice write. |
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Re: Ride
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by Ruby2sdy on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 10:00:55 AM AEST
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It would be nice, wouldn't it? to just escape it all (especially the bills lol) a lovely write, thank you
2sdy xxx |
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Re: Ride
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by ribbons_and_lace09 on
Wednesday, 30th July 2008 @ 04:00:26 AM AEST
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you hit the nail on the head with this write. :) very good. i liked it.
always,
megan |
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