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Time Stops
Contributed by
lostrelic
on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 01:56:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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So we are sitting in kool aid bars and lemon stands waiting for the silent bus
comfortably shocked from the news that whispered from every radio
the whistle blows time to drop the food
kool cans riding down dream streets humming songs of tomorrow
yellow cap feather slick back shades riding hard to fast for the masses
revved up liquid pumping fast corner strikes another fleck
time stops shatters
getting up twisted dead somewhere whistle blows
sirens sound men in white coats running with red bags
blue blurs bars time stops freedom fades drunken losses
wake up hurting judge in the face
shallow answers stupid more the judge
more bars empty meals fear in looks
dead friend blood on hands
time spent
time stops
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lostrelic
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2008-07-29 13:56:17]
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Re: Time Stops
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 03:06:32 PM AEST
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| this is the type of poem that can make you think. the flow was great and you used excellent imagery. the ending was perfect. |
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