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Congratulations
Contributed by
holy
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Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 03:08:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Congratulations
It was lunchtime,
you were saying thanks to your friends,
"thank you all,
your kindness is grateful."
"You are welcome.
We are great friends,
A friend in need is a friend indeed,
we are not just saying that."
one of your friends said.
I could see you were very moved,
"This time,
our produce is out of joint,
but you are always friendly with my family.
I am glad you like our produce,
I will put more effort into our work,
mere words are not enough to express my thanks."
That friend smiled to our son,
"Your dad told me you will return this evening,
little boy,
come here,
I will take your picture."
We are staying in Pingnan of Guangxi now,
we have been here for half a month.
For the past few days,
we were royally entertained,
I have to hand it you,
you really do a good job.
That day,
you told me you wanted to come here with me,
I felt very happy.
When I knew you come here for solving the problem,
I was a little dubious if I will interfere your duty.
Your words made me feel better,
"You are always my lucky star,
if you follow me,
I will feel very relaxed.
Depend upon it,
we will succeed."
I joyfully consented,
and we set out the following morning,
I felt a little cool in the autumn dawn,
your confidence made me better,
I prayed to God for your lilter.
I see,
The business is more difficult than I have bargained for.
These day,
you got up early and went to bed late,
I knew you hadn't sleep well,
so I won't take up much of your time.
And I told our son,
"Your dad is very busy,
we must not chisel on him,
I will stay here and keep you company."
After lunch this afternoon,
you said to me,
"I am so sorry,
I have no any time take you arond the city,
we must be going this evening,
our company is in want of these moneys."
I smiled,
"Congratulations.
Don't worry,
I never mind,
I am prond of you,
you should take a rest for a long time this afternoon.
my love,
don't you feel?
I like the room."
Now,
our son is reading,
you are asleep,
I am writing down something very touching about this short trip......
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holy
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Re: Congratulations
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by LifeFadingAway on
Wednesday, 30th July 2008 @ 09:38:28 AM AEST
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| Wow.. That's all I have to say. |
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Re: Congratulations
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 30th July 2008 @ 02:10:53 PM AEST
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another write so full of joy.
Michelle |
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