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untitled
Contributed by
redsleeve
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Wednesday, 30th July 2008 @ 10:07:42 AM in AEST
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it started with a glance
from across a crowded room
the dancers were the attraction
but the best light was on you
so naturally, i'm hooked
you have all my attention
i must meet her outside
this domain of pretensions
months go by... nothing
a word here or there
like "hi, how are you" or
"may i please have a beer"
then one night as we were smoking
after you got off of work
some courage showed up
along with a smirk
i'm thinking i'm slick
with a trick up my sleeve
maybe i'll kiss her
as she tries to leave
but then i was stunned...
you kissed me
stopped me dead
all of a sudden
i'm not sure what love is
you've shaken my core
blurred my vision
captured my breath
so i've made you my mission
all in a moment
one single kiss
seemed like eternity
in our moment of bliss
on single moment
i'm entirely changed
i will drop my whole world
at the sound of your name
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redsleeve
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2008-07-30 10:07:42]
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Re: untitled
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 30th July 2008 @ 01:45:47 PM AEST
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Nice flow to this write. I also enjoyed the story line with it, sweet .
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