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ill love you forever
Contributed by
sparkz16
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Wednesday, 30th July 2008 @ 06:50:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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when you came around, i wanted to meet you.
when i first met you, i knew i wouldnt forget you.
when we hung out for the first time, i couldnt forget you.
when i first kissed you, i felt that tingle.
when i first held you, i didnt want to let you go.
when i came over to sleep with you, i didnt want to ever wake up.
when we layed there watching that movie, i didnt want the movie to end.
when we would be on the phone for hours, i didnt want the phone to die.
when i told id love you forever, i meant till the world came to a crumble.
when i said till the end, i meant till my very last breath.
when we said it was over, thats when i lost you and couldnt forget you...
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2008-07-30 18:50:31]
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Re: ill love you forever
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by shelby on
Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 10:01:17 AM AEST
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Adorable and sweet write........
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Re: ill love you forever
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 01:16:49 AM AEST
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aw this is so sweet and very straight from the heart.. very intense write.. good job here
rock on,
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