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Behind Closed Doors
Contributed by
Cayleigh-Chan
on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 12:53:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Oh, no...
Brace yourself
Here come those blood curdling screams.
Their begging to be set free.
But, I lock them up,
Throw away the key,
And hope they stay inside of me.
My god, my everything
No...
A wolf in sheeps clothing.
Morbid thoughts.
So un-pure,
And the secrets that they hide.
Turned my world upside down.
My heaven,
Now my hell.
You choked me with my halo,
And pulled me off my cloud.
Free-fall Free-fall,
Ha, no.
I plummeted.
Ha- But like you said,
No one has to know.
Because, well...
Secrets lie behind closed doors.
Again...
I throw away the key.
Copyright ©
Cayleigh-Chan
... [
2008-08-01 00:53:15]
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Re: Behind Closed Doors
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 01:02:48 AM AEST
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a very interesting intense write.. I liked the flow and the wording
rock on,
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Re: Behind Closed Doors
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by ingeniusidiot on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 01:18:24 AM AEST
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I have to agree...interesting and very intense...I think that you did a brilliant job. I cant speak about any certain lines for loved the enitre write...GREAT JOB!!!
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Re: Behind Closed Doors
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 01:54:26 AM AEST
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"You choked me with my halo,
And pulled me off my cloud."
This says so much to me..Kind of sums up the entire poem.... Lovely work here....
Thanks again..
Jenni
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Re: Behind Closed Doors
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by Kool4ever on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 10:00:43 AM AEST
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| I luv it XD |
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