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Enemy
Contributed by
crow
on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 10:32:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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You are welcome
your hand brings that menacing feeling
sharpening My eyes, quicking words.
I am infected, your blade is sharp and needed.
Distastful air
Wine abundant ,who drinks first
I keep You close, sit here.
Copyright ©
crow
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2008-08-01 10:32:02]
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Re: Enemy
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by shelby on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 10:36:09 AM AEST
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How close can you keep me?
God this is intense!
hugs
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Re: Enemy
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 10:50:18 AM AEST
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excellent
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Re: Enemy
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 11:12:06 AM AEST
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a deep write and very intense.. i love this.. these 3 poems i've read all seem to go together awesome job here
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Enemy
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by emystar on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 12:39:59 PM AEST
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Cute.
Looks like you-n--shelby are having a blast here.
good work.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Enemy
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by calebcrain on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 02:36:22 PM AEST
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| this is a great write |
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Re: Enemy
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by ingeniusidiot on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 10:43:55 PM AEST
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It is really cool how these 3 poems can follow suit so brilliantly. This was very intense...Great job Lane.
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