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A Mother's Point of View
Contributed by
KismetsPoet
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Saturday, 2nd August 2008 @ 09:16:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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What's this? What's this?
'Alone' 'A Secret' 'Broken'
It's so sad, so depressing
Is this how she feels?
And 'Gone,' who died?
And was it suicide?
I'm sure she hasn't tried
What's this?
There's 'Freedom In Death'
Or are those seperate titles?
I just cannot remember
*IS* it 'Freedom,' not 'Freed'?
So sad, that's bad
And what's this about cutting?
Does my baby have scars?
And why? Let's raise the bar!
What's this?
'I Am' and 'Lies'
Who lied? And was it gossip
That hurt my baby's feelings?
I hope she beat them up!
'I Am,' you're who?
The shadow always creeping?
The eyes that watch you sleeping?
What's this?... **record scratches**
'GIVE ME A MAN'!?!?!?!?!?!?
Note: 'Freedom In Death' is really 'Freed' and 'In Death.' Titles are purposely wrong
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Re: A Mother's Point of View
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd August 2008 @ 12:19:22 AM AEST
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| Ha, I really liked this. I can feel the histeria she would go through reading your poetry. I wish I knew the tune! |
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