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Kiss Of Betrayal
Contributed by
Debi-x3
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Saturday, 2nd August 2008 @ 09:21:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Every things changing
Nothings gone right
I find myself crying
In the middle of the night
I cant take it back
Whats done is done
The pain in this life
All I can do is run
Killing me slowly
With each breath I take
Dying inside
My world begins to quake
Yes, I caused hurt
And its all of my fault
I should have learned the first time
At least thats what i thought
What a friend I was
To stoop so low
And with a kiss of betrayal
I dread let my friend go :^)(N)
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Re: Kiss Of Betrayal
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by shelby on
Saturday, 2nd August 2008 @ 02:07:41 PM AEST
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sad write, you know what you did now fix it. You cant beat yourself up none of us are perfect, part of learning is making mistakes.
You wrote a lovely emotional poem.
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