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The Dirty Pie
Contributed by
Ed-master
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Sunday, 3rd August 2008 @ 02:44:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
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There was a disgusting pie, that the hobo ate,
Which he found on the street and it wasn't quite neat,
He picked it up and he scoffed it up,
Because he was really quite hungry,
But then he realised it hurt his tummy,
So he puked it out, it sprayed all about and he had to go home hungry!
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Re: The Dirty Pie
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by PlainFreshRain on
Wednesday, 13th August 2008 @ 03:42:38 AM AEST
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Hi Edmundo!
Welcome to YPDC!
This made me smile, your humor is crude, so I get it...
Keep chugging them out old boy, I like to read your stuff.
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Re: The Dirty Pie
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th August 2008 @ 01:57:36 AM AEST
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Hey Edmund!!
Cool poem! very- interesting!!
Do you have any other poems??
It was very like you- gross humour!!
Beth
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Re: The Dirty Pie
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 02:42:39 AM AEST
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Hey Ed! Again!
I posted a poem-called Death
Beth
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Re: The Dirty Pie
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by SLou on
Sunday, 14th September 2008 @ 01:03:50 AM AEST
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i like it.
sorry, thats all i can say about it really!
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Re: The Dirty Pie
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 10:57:49 AM AEST
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Hi Edmund like the poem but hobos dont have homes!!!! HA HA!! Funny though! made me smile for once!!
Georgia
p.s on beths user name |
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Re: The Dirty Pie
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by PlainFreshRain on
Saturday, 8th November 2008 @ 05:21:11 PM AEST
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Hi Edmund
You have to post more man, I know you have loads buzzing around in your head and copy books!
Stay fresh
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