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Win it Once then Lose it All
Contributed by
beautiful_letdowns
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Sunday, 3rd August 2008 @ 08:12:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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We are the ones with blood stained wrists
Opportunities lost and chances missed
Win it once then lose it all
Dive into the deep end and forget to recall
Times of triumph continuously prevail
Doubts and sad times dont exist in this tale
Hope brings in a new light to shade
Old loves fade fast and new loves are made
Splendor and rust are sometimes confused
The fine line between them is often abused
Take your time to jump onto this train
For once you do, youre never the same.
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2008-08-03 08:12:21]
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Re: Win it Once then Lose it All
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 3rd August 2008 @ 08:43:46 AM AEST
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i like this poem. it expresses many feelings and aspects of life, esp. at the last line, it sux but it's true. take care
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