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To my Dad
Contributed by
eternalsunshine
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Tuesday, 5th August 2008 @ 06:15:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I wondered the earth
for as long as i can see,
searching for you
the soul of your essence...
I traveled high and low
out and about
once even climbed the highest mountain
and you where nowhere to be found...
I swam across the Atlantic
just for you to see,
how much i cared
just to find you never there...
I used to talk to the wind
who showed no remorse,
who used to fly by
just like you used too...
I often talked to the fishes
out in the lake,
they never once heard my name
from your lips...
I even friended the grass
who always gave a lending hand,
on days of hardship sometimes we find our selfs
when you failed to ask, have i had anything to snack?...
I never asked for a thing
nor even to be born,
but before i die, i like to know
have you ever loved, the way i loved you?
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eternalsunshine
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Re: To my Dad
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 5th August 2008 @ 12:31:22 PM AEST
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Hun, this just tore me up. My heck this is so emotional and sad, what a touching write but I am so sorry for your hurts.
hugs u
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Re: To my Dad
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by Crow on
Thursday, 7th August 2008 @ 03:50:10 AM AEST
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| sweetheart..if I were your Father, and I read this... there would be no power on this earth that would keep me from your door.. this is heartbreaking" and I too am sorry for the pain in your heart.. Lane |
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Re: To my Dad
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 7th August 2008 @ 04:59:24 AM AEST
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This is so heartbreaking... I am so sorry you have gone through this... I hope someday you find the answers..
Jenni |
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