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Hope
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nickyboy
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Tuesday, 5th August 2008 @ 07:23:16 AM in AEST
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i woke today to the strangest thing i have to say reminding me of just the other day not today you heard me say the same old thing....again i say no excuses for the other day sorry always seems so hard to say...i dress the words but still they mean the same old thing cause i. Dont know how to face today ...no matter how much you think you gave to me, will you ever forgive me for all that ive put you through. Ive changed to see whats your reason for your hate in me..ive tried to make another way to help you see im not the same...you hear me say its killing me...deep inside.
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Re: Hope
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 5th August 2008 @ 03:35:33 PM AEST
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Sincere write. I liked the message.
I would like to see it in stanza form, I get distracted reading poems written in this way, just a suggestion I think it would read better.
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