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Bloodless.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
on
Tuesday, 5th August 2008 @ 07:45:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Blood turned to mud
It's hard to bleed when there is no love
No heart, no beat
My breaths are incomplete
Ice cold, I am ice cold
I am the saddest story ever told
I am alive
I am dead
I am alone inside my head
Crumbling, stumbling
Through a valley of broken dreams
Tearing at the seams
I'm about to burst
This is me at my worst
Breaking and forsaking
What it means to exist
Cut my dirty wrists
I got poison in my chest
I get no rest
This is my suffering
Being expressed
No one understands
I've got broken hands
Everything is gone
Because I can't hold on
Lost my grip
Let it slip
Now the pain never ceases
And I'm falling to pieces
Left behind
Lost my mind
Black skies
I live under black skies
Pain rains from my eyes
I am chaos
I am disaster
A broken angel
Decending faster and faster
But it doesn't matter
There's nothing left of me to shatter
I can hit the ground
Without a sound
As the world looks down from above
I am an open wound...
But it's hard to bleed when there is no love.
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bleedthelove
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2008-08-05 07:45:29]
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Re: Bloodless.
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 5th August 2008 @ 03:39:49 PM AEST
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This could make me shiver there is so much pain in it.
Hard hitting and very emotional write, had a good flow to it. So sorry you feelin so sad
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Re: Bloodless.
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by ZiggyB on
Tuesday, 5th August 2008 @ 10:18:19 PM AEST
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Deep and emotional
Nice write.
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