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One Hour
Contributed by
ryanadams
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Wednesday, 6th August 2008 @ 10:54:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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For every day there is at least one hour
During which you dont feel sour
You feel as if the world is good
Everything seems as it should
But alas,
These hours pass
And everything goes to hell
As you know well
But I would give all these hours
Just to see you when youre sour
To be able to ease your mind
Would be, almighty fine
But theres no telling what Id give
To be with you as you live
And knowing this probably wont come true
Is enough to turn this man blue
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ryanadams
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2008-08-06 10:54:47]
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Re: One Hour
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by ryanadams on
Thursday, 7th August 2008 @ 09:05:21 AM AEST
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| I wrote this poem about a girl i met while on vacation in panama city florida. Bieng around her made me feel great, but I live 7 hours away, so it could never be. |
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Re: One Hour
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by catz77 on
Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 12:39:33 AM AEST
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Aw. This was good. I liked it.
Sorry for the other post.
I love life and I thought bitter things. well
anyway. Keep writing.
^_^ |
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