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face down
Contributed by
maggot
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Thursday, 7th August 2008 @ 10:00:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Face down on the ground
Blood pooling all around
The world is a haze
I am out of this maze
This maze is called life
Dying slowly holding this knife
silent pain
severed vien
blackness all around
hearing no sound
gone from misery and pain
a life down the drain
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2008-08-07 10:00:47]
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Re: face down
(User Rating: 1 )
by Bubbles02 on
Thursday, 7th August 2008 @ 10:37:41 AM AEST
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| Wow. Short, but very powerful. I really liked it. |
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Re: face down
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sheveg on
Tuesday, 17th August 2010 @ 01:49:05 PM AEST
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Intense!
Sherry |
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