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Hidden Love
Contributed by
jessb3
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Tuesday, 12th August 2008 @ 05:05:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Safe within a wooden chest
That's gilt with leaf of gold
My love for you is locked within
Forevermore controlled
In my heart this chest will stay
So no one else can see
That even though the time flies by
You'll always hold the key
Copyright ©
jessb3
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2008-08-12 17:05:07]
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Re: Hidden Love
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by Personifyinthepoeticdream on
Tuesday, 12th August 2008 @ 05:34:48 PM AEST
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| i love this its short beautiful sweet and full of longing nice! :-) |
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Re: Hidden Love
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by ZiggyB on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 10:13:31 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful piece of writing.
Keep em coming
~Stephan |
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Re: Hidden Love
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by Spike on
Sunday, 17th August 2008 @ 08:40:25 PM AEST
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Awww... that's so so sweet. Sucked me right in. Well done.
Spike |
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Re: Hidden Love
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 04:28:30 AM AEST
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Short, sweet, succinct, brilliant!
Regards, John. |
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