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Whenever You're Ready
Contributed by
curtisc
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Wednesday, 13th August 2008 @ 04:02:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When you find it I'm here, I know it's still there. It wouldn't just disappear, or vanish into thin air.
Take all the time that you need, make sure that it's right. I'm not here to mislead, but rather to show you the light.
You deserve what I can give, true happiness is real. It's time for us to live, live that life that's so surreal...
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2008-08-13 04:02:06] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Whenever You're Ready
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th August 2008 @ 12:33:11 PM AEST (User
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aw, i like it. it's a sweet little poem. the flow was really good throughout the whole poem. i like how you ended it too. |
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