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Love and Romance
Contributed by
studedude
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Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 05:19:32 AM in AEST
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Love is a very strange feeling.
It can be one of the best emotions,
or it can be one of the worst.
They say to fall in love is foolish,
I say they are the fools.
Romance is the key,
that and communication.
they will keep love interesting,
and the flames of passion burning.
If you have them, life will last.
Life is fickle, love is fast,
we fall in and out of love so quick.
How will it ever last?
If we cannot contain our feelings,
the flame will burn to nothing.
Without the flame, there is no life,
without life there is nothing.
With nothing there is no love,
with no love comes no romance,
no romance, no passion.
Only fools will let the flame die,
only fools will lose their love,
we must keep the passion alive
and keep the life alive
we must always survive.
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studedude
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Re: Love and Romance
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by Muinanyere on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 05:48:20 AM AEST
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| This is very well written, and it flows wonderfully. Love is hard to keep sometimes though, especially if you've been hurt. Welcome to YPDC! Looking forward to more posts from you. |
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Re: Love and Romance
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by ButchCorpuz on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 03:04:29 PM AEST
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I find your poem to be very inspiring.
Wonderful poem. Keep writing.
- Butch Corpuz |
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Re: Love and Romance
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by Puppy on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 06:04:10 PM AEST
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hey welcome to the site! i really enjoyed your poem, the second last verse said it all to me well done!
Puppy :) |
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Re: Love and Romance
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by ZiggyB on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 09:40:31 PM AEST
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For your first one...not bad
Everything starts with a thought.
Good work. |
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Re: Love and Romance
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by Mick_Puttock on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 10:45:06 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, and I enjoyed your first submission here, great message and good flow.
Mick |
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Re: Love and Romance
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by little_genna on
Saturday, 16th August 2008 @ 07:08:30 AM AEST
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while this not something i tend to write about it was very well put together. you have some things to think about in the poem which tends to keep me interested enough to get to the end..
you might wanna check line 13 too. im sure you meant 'our' not 'out'.
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Re: Love and Romance
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by studedude on
Saturday, 16th August 2008 @ 10:10:26 AM AEST
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| Please note, line 13, replace out with our. |
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