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Apologue
Contributed by
gravehorn
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Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 04:53:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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T was an air for fairytales and stories to be told.
The seasoned whispers calmly claiming fables of the bold.
Legends wrought of fantasy, though none were eer believed,
Save for one unsightly mark whos call the world conceived.
When whispers broke the silence and asphodels were white
Beneath the starry halls above, beyond the mortal sight,
The phantom of the universe grew silent in his shell
Where from his cradle forged the seasons, heaven and a hell.
Planar lands of greens and blue, where winds crawled gently by.
A world of even circumstance, entropic to his eye.
He forged the dawn and shaped the dusk, he smelt the mountains red
Yet when mankind had made its place, the lord already fled.
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Re: Apologue
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by FRANCO on
Thursday, 14th August 2008 @ 05:31:45 PM AEST
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Well written, and i like the way words have been used here, wonderful indeed.
Thank you for sharing.
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Re: Apologue
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by wizard on
Friday, 15th August 2008 @ 11:32:14 AM AEST
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nicely done,
truly a great piece, i loved every line.
("who's" should be "whose" in line 4)
nicely done,
wiz |
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