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confuse
Contributed by
elizabeth395
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Friday, 15th August 2008 @ 02:04:33 AM in AEST
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Now and then I think of him
Now and then I dont
Someday ill talk to him
But right now I wont.
I love him I love him not
Could I but I shall not.
What does this mean? Could it be? Love!
I think not
I see the sky all black and white
i see the water all flat and shallow
I see him and I see me
I see two people just waiting to be
I see all my life and future
With him ahead of me.
Walking through the hallways
Walking through the streets
Hes always in my mind
And my wildest dreams.
Everyday every night
How could this be?
When I know he cant be for me
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elizabeth395
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2008-08-15 02:04:33]
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Re: confuse
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 15th August 2008 @ 03:02:15 AM AEST
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Welcome to the "Club Confused"!
I enjoyed the flow in this. Well done..
P/S.. Welcome to YPDC....
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Re: confuse
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th August 2008 @ 10:41:12 AM AEST
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Nicely expressed and well done.
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Re: confuse
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by wizard on
Friday, 15th August 2008 @ 11:24:51 AM AEST
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maybe he is for you... maybe it is love...you wont know unless you do talk to him,
nicely done,
wiz |
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Re: confuse
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by ZiggyB on
Saturday, 16th August 2008 @ 12:02:05 AM AEST
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This is tuff...but don't give up
Good write |
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