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LAPSE
Contributed by
hose-aye
on
Friday, 15th August 2008 @ 10:21:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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a boy. not yet man.
lost. unplugged. on the virge of existence.
he holds it in his hands.-beating. bleeding. broken.
unoticed in the crowd as red drips down his touch, he is trapped; between breath and dream.
Among the swarm of deceased faces, he stands motionless in an act of hope.
A girl. not yet woman.
in search. alive. wanting nothing and everything.
she holds it in her hands.-beating. barrickaded. breakable.
unoticed in the crowd as she closes off her soul, in protection for the one she dreams of speaking love.
she is trapped between love and a false prophecy.
among the swarm of deceased faces, she drifts in an act of hope.
A boy. not yet man.
a girl. not yet woman.
she touches his eyes.
he touches her heart.
understanding. unborn. unprecedented.
and she slipped right through his fingers...
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hose-aye
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2008-08-15 10:21:19]
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Re: LAPSE
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 15th August 2008 @ 10:50:14 AM AEST
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A beautifully touching write... Brought a tear to my eyes....Well done..
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Re: LAPSE
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by wizard on
Friday, 15th August 2008 @ 11:21:42 AM AEST
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nice write, very emotive,
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Re: LAPSE
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by brew on
Sunday, 24th August 2008 @ 05:46:41 AM AEST
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Sorry for the hurting of the heart. It happens, yet we bounce back.....well for the most part. beautiful write tho.....very felt feelings.
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