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First Date
Contributed by
elizabeth395
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Saturday, 16th August 2008 @ 11:20:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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Sitting here and there
All I do is think
Do I wear the blue shirt?
Or the hot pink.
Running over here
Running over there
Trying to see what shoes to wear
Looking in the mirror
Searching for mistakes
I began wonder how great this is
Leaving on a date for the very first time
Wow! How happy and nervous I am all combined
He came to get me
In his red hot ride
For a moment we stared
And smiled at the same time
Coming back home
All I did was think
What was I going to do
For my
VERY FIRT AND REAL KISS
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elizabeth395
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2008-08-16 23:20:45]
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Re: First Date
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 18th August 2008 @ 03:53:35 PM AEST
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mmMmm i'm glad ur date went well. i thot of this poem as more of happy/love poetry, but it was pretty funny how typical we are preparing for the date. good job. hope for many more dates to come. take care
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