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WEEPING HEART
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emystar
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Sunday, 17th August 2008 @ 04:46:28 PM in AEST
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God, reality rips her inside out
When all was ever wan'ted was luv.
People lie, cheat and leave pain.
When it gets right to it, they shove.
Father this weeping heart
feels her soul, so crushed.
That one day was me
Feelin so alone, scarred, flushed.
Some one tried to kill me, abuse her.
Neither of us knew what's up.
Years later memories rise
Over feelin stolen, innocenes cup.
Enemies try to steal the soul
But will not take us down.
Sure the sea gets turbulent
But Jesus our ships won't drown.
Look up my frightened child
Momma's standing in gap fo you
Tween evil bluff, trying to kill.
God never leaves me-n-you.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2008-08-17 16:46:28]
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Re: WEEPING HEART
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 17th August 2008 @ 09:04:32 PM AEST
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This is a very nice write. It is both painful and sad, yet also has a positive note and ending to it.
I would love to hear the song.
Take care and keep it up.
Tim
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Re: WEEPING HEART
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 17th August 2008 @ 11:30:14 PM AEST
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I just love how you are always so positive, my friend.... Beautifully sad..and so heart rending..
Keep them coming, grrlfriend...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: WEEPING HEART
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by wizard on
Monday, 18th August 2008 @ 10:17:04 PM AEST
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awesome write emy,
so many emotions stir as i read this... would make a great song...
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Re: WEEPING HEART
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th August 2008 @ 07:30:31 AM AEST
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No one can ever tell you that you don't know what it's like, cause you sure do!
And those rough times, if nothing else, make the bond stronger! |
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Re: WEEPING HEART
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 5th September 2008 @ 07:42:39 AM AEST
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this is beautiful and so strong emy girl,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: WEEPING HEART
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 05:40:00 PM AEST
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| This is a good write, I can almost relate! |
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Re: WEEPING HEART
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th September 2008 @ 02:57:17 AM AEST
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A lovely piece emy, your gallery of poetic
treasures where beauty flurishes and
remains forever etch in the heart of the
reader . . .
((((emystar))))
i'll pass along the hi 2 joan 4u . . .
likewise ty 4 your read . . .
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Re: WEEPING HEART
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th September 2008 @ 11:12:45 PM AEST
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Oh Emy, this was so powerful! The message here is clear
and strong! There is a sadness to some of it, yes, but there
is no denying the strength of conviction in standing your
ground!
Beautifully put, hun . Your immense heart and strength
never fail to inspire me. Thank you for sharing both!
peace and love,
~ Breezy
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Re: WEEPING HEART
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 04:17:42 PM AEST
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Emy~
This is painfully sad my friend, but it also
has a positive note to it. You have been through
the roughest of times, but you my friend are one
heck of a strong lady and you know you can never
keep a good woman like yourself down.
May God shower his blessings and keep you and
yours safe always.
much love & hugs,
sue m
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Re: WEEPING HEART
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by 3660Days on
Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 08:42:11 PM AEST
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| Very nice, I especially liked the second stanza. |
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