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Apathetic No More
Contributed by
beautiful_letdowns
on
Thursday, 21st August 2008 @ 03:22:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Remember me when you go to sleep
The time we lost is out of reach
Remember all the fights we shared
When you lied to me and told me you cared
Remember the butterflies, remember the tears
The hard times had in those three years
Remember the trials and remember the errors
The dissolving love to who knows where
Remember my smile and remember my cry
All the minutes well wasted in our good-byes
Remember the love that together we grew
Smile that it ended as all good things do.
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beautiful_letdowns
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2008-08-21 03:22:40]
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Re: Apathetic No More
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by Sheehan321 on
Thursday, 21st August 2008 @ 05:51:10 AM AEST
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hmm i like this very much.
I think its somthing that a lot of people can relate to. Good work i like it. |
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Re: Apathetic No More
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by Crow on
Thursday, 21st August 2008 @ 09:56:24 AM AEST
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| I like the way this ends..very pointed. good read. Lane |
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Re: Apathetic No More
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 21st August 2008 @ 12:24:11 PM AEST
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I really like this... it's sad but really positive...
Good poem...
Jenni |
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Re: Apathetic No More
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st August 2008 @ 02:01:12 PM AEST
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I like it. Sad and pretty all at the same time.
Thanks,
Tim |
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