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Dreaming?
Contributed by
eternalsunshine
on
Thursday, 21st August 2008 @ 04:51:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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i meet you there
where no one has gone
above the clouds into the blue...
out into the void
ill hold your hand
kiss you in secret for sure...
our eyes touch in darkness
through the sun rays
our souls connect...
feet's conjoined
swirled in to light
dancing through
the never ending knot...
down to earth
so wild we fantasize
could all this be, just a dream?
Copyright ©
eternalsunshine
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2008-08-21 04:51:19]
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Re: Dreaming?
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by Crow on
Thursday, 21st August 2008 @ 09:53:32 AM AEST
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| very pretty poem..as light as a feather..I like that. Lane |
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Re: Dreaming?
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 21st August 2008 @ 10:04:17 AM AEST
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Beautiful..and so surreal... Nicely done
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Re: Dreaming?
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by Starchild7 on
Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 01:09:38 AM AEST
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That was just so beautiful i really loved this, thank you.
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