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the carnival of empty thoughts
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Friday, 22nd August 2008 @ 10:04:08 AM in AEST
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Welcome one and all welcome to our show, the things you cant imagine is all here in one go
stories and pictures all stuff to blow your mind, why sit right there why wont you get in line
hey you the one in the back, making faces with both hands behind your back, come on up i will give you front row i will really show you the show
watch your head its a little tight, close your eyes the light gets quite bright, here is the quack if you look to the left, he is the one whose slap you will forget
now this is called family just look in there eyes, you see the pain they are trying to hide, whoa did you see that was the first taste of life, do not worry there is more of that fright
as we walk just see how things grow from playing with cars and now entombed in them we go, we have sitting in high school and dreams of making big
running away hey if thats your gig,come now do you not want to go on, what is that look in your eyes, do not hide we just started this horrible ride
love and fantasy lust then plane hate something all of us take keep your eyes open stay away from the drug do you want to slow down then drag
experience the thrills that go with the game so of us jump but in the end its the same we live and we die its the middle that counts now do not forget to let yourself out
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Re: the carnival of empty thoughts
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by wizard on
Friday, 22nd August 2008 @ 12:09:44 PM AEST
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nice, reminds me of being at the sideshow of the circus when i was a kid...
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Re: the carnival of empty thoughts
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd August 2008 @ 01:12:11 PM AEST
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I love how you did this. I could totally picture the deranged ringleader, full of cynicism. It seems our experiences in life can make us that way sometimes. I love the bit of inspired advice at the end as well. Great job.
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Re: the carnival of empty thoughts
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by FRANCO on
Saturday, 23rd August 2008 @ 02:45:56 AM AEST
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Dear friend it's wonderfully penned, and it's not "the carnival of empty thoughts" but carnival of life itself.
I liked the the flawless flow of words.
Thanks for sharing my friend.
regards,
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