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Tragic Visions
Contributed by
wizard
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Saturday, 23rd August 2008 @ 03:49:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Heed not the truths within these splendid lies
Brought forth unto our very eyes,
Pay no esteem to this fantastic dream
Upon this pedestal supreme.
Disregard the garish bell as it rings
Marvel not in the hope it brings,
Empty echoes call as its clapper sways;
Reverberating through this maze.
Never accuse the scripture as its read
Of so misleading the misled;
Confused and tempted, treading steps their own,
Upon this dreaded path unknown.
Do not begrudge disasters as they wake,
Although a life or two they take.
Their intention is not of ill content
As it is Mother Nature sent.
Blame not fervent fires of casting sin,
As flames upon a rooftop grin.
Hold not these hurricanes within a cage
Nor flooding waters as they rage.
Copyright ©
wizard
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2008-08-23 03:49:28]
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Re: Tragic Visions
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd August 2008 @ 04:13:33 AM AEST
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This is brilliant Wiz, incredible. The word choice, as always, is perfect and inspiring. I love the message, that you cannot place blame where it is not due. Beautifully written.
~Jesse |
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Re: Tragic Visions
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 23rd August 2008 @ 04:50:43 AM AEST
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Sage advice..well done...
Jenni |
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Re: Tragic Visions
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by navydocny on
Monday, 25th August 2008 @ 02:46:24 AM AEST
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One of the best that I've read....
Keep it coming... |
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Re: Tragic Visions
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by FRANCO on
Tuesday, 26th August 2008 @ 01:14:34 AM AEST
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Dear friend, the beautifully woven rhyming words making it more like a melodious song...Wonderful write indeed.
Regards,
FRANCO. |
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Re: Tragic Visions
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th August 2008 @ 09:18:17 AM AEST
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" Disregard the garish bell as it rings…
Marvel not in the hope it brings, '" . . .
i love this line, along with the eventual
conclusion it leads to, nice flow and
and style, splendid writting . . .
thank you also for your read and comment.
Ben . . .
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Re: Tragic Visions
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by eeeitak on
Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 07:35:11 AM AEST
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"Never accuse the scripture as its read
Of so misleading the misled;
Confused and tempted, treading steps their own,
Upon this dreaded path unknown."
Brilliant, as is the whole poem. Great job :D |
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Re: Tragic Visions
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 06:14:46 AM AEST
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I like the metaphors and this has such depth!
I think there is much ambiguity in the lines...much you are telling/not telling...nicely done! |
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