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Sea Of Despair
Contributed by
Mistyskies
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Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sea Of Despair
I'm drifting no drowning in my sea of despair.
My heads above water but barely its there.
I'm looking towards heaven to see if he hears my plea, for a hand to throw me a line and save me.
My plea is not answered or maybe not heard, oh where might he be too busy with women just as desperate as me?
I'm sinking I sunk down deep deep below my life is now over as it swallows me hole.
No one to hear my plea of despair no one to care.
My life can't be over I struggle and fight to desperately reach the air and the light.
Alone I'm not for a hand does appear to save my life from this sea of despair.
By:
Mary Ann Holley ( Mistyskies)
Copyright ©
Mistyskies
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2003-03-18 05:05:00]
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Re: Sea Of Despair
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 11:02:07 AM AEST
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What an incredible talent you have. It is amazing how such beautiful words can be created from such desperate emotions.
I am glad life is better for you now :))
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Re: Sea Of Despair
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 09:55:16 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, Mary... This is such a good write..you have expressed the despair so well... (and if you don't mind me saying so, with a little bit of editing, I'd say it was a GREAT poem).... Superb imagery!!
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