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most said..
Contributed by
crow
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Sunday, 24th August 2008 @ 12:49:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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When breath did not exist..
the soul a fleeting thing,
emptied the room.
To that very moment..
most thought a hollow man...
I leaned in..
touched His hand...
He knew love more than all the lovers.
Protecting love..
nourishing love with acts,
waiting its birth...
Breath was taken in,
and released with that thought..
tears when lost
flooding when witnessed.
to the last minute..believed in its return.
Hollow most said..but...
He knew love...Vincent
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2008-08-24 00:49:19]
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Re: most said..
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 24th August 2008 @ 01:39:06 AM AEST
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A beautiful write, Crow... sad ..but good to know he knew loved before he left....that is what is important... Many people do not...
Good write..
Hugs
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Re: most said..
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by brew on
Sunday, 24th August 2008 @ 05:06:46 AM AEST
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Well, good to love, but why hurt in the long run?!?!
Its over rated.....or maybe....unrated...*shrugs*
Loved the work tho.
Smiles
brew~ |
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Re: most said..
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 25th August 2008 @ 10:53:48 AM AEST
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love the bottom line ....touching write my friend
Shari |
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Re: most said..
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 11:21:01 AM AEST
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Oh Lane, this was absolutely magnificent!! I have fallen so deeply
into every line ... every word. This is just the kind of thing I'd
expect from a heart such as yours. Too beautiful, my friend.
I'm with Shari. The last line is just damn moving!
Love that you are posting more these days. ;)
~ Breezy
(btw, got the email and LOVE THE FREAKING SONG!!!!!!! Send me it
with labels!! lol I'll email you soon) |
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Re: most said..
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by eeeitak on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 07:35:22 AM AEST
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| This is breathtaking! The way you word everything... You've got quite a talent. Great write :) |
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