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Sand
Contributed by
navydocny
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Sunday, 24th August 2008 @ 10:59:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Desert sand, is a craving soul
As is the oar, without its thole
Parched and broken but quite undead
To thirst such love, life all but bled
Water is life, the love, the want
Without such love, the soul will daunt
Her loving rain, her precious care
Brings forth the bloom, even where its rare
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navydocny
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2008-08-24 22:59:36]
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Re: Sand
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th August 2008 @ 05:38:38 AM AEST
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Wow, beautifully written. I love the metaphors of nature to life, as well as your word choices. Great job, I'm sold.
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Re: Sand
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by wizard on
Monday, 25th August 2008 @ 09:06:38 AM AEST
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welcome to the site,
awesome post.. .keep it up!!
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