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Repeating
Contributed by
pengal
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Monday, 25th August 2008 @ 08:35:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I repent for miscalculating you
For misbehaving and doubting you
I never displayed my trust
The lust of the flesh took me over
And I came at you like a 100 ton train
I crashed into your hopes
and filled your home with dope
Oh please forgive my mistrust
I repent of my wrong doing
I was trapped between time and space
I was broken up
Like broken vases
I repent of a million sins
Can I ever begin to fight my disposition
Can I recreate a new revention
Just forgive me, Please forgive me
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pengal
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2008-08-25 08:35:43]
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Re: Repeating
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by wizard on
Monday, 25th August 2008 @ 11:28:18 AM AEST
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sounds like you really are sorry,
nicely done,
wiz |
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Re: Repeating
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by navydocny on
Tuesday, 26th August 2008 @ 12:02:04 AM AEST
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Contrition is extremely hard to articulate.
Very good effort!
I know the feeling..... |
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Re: Repeating
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by Catalina on
Monday, 22nd September 2008 @ 06:43:04 AM AEST
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| nicely done! Keep em coming |
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