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The Rope
Contributed by
navydocny
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Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 01:53:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The weathered rope still holds the weight
Keeping me berthed to my mate
Skiffs lashed together against a storm
The craggy rope, still holding is torn
Standing against the scouring of age
Tethering us two, opposing squalls rage
Golden hemp thats battered and worn
Will hold on my hand till our love is reborn
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navydocny
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2008-08-27 01:53:28]
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Re: The Rope
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 10:18:21 AM AEST
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A wonderful testament to the truth and devotion that love holds
in and around us. I adore the metaphors. I especially love the usage
of a tempestuous sea and being tied to each other as a lifeboat to a
ship. Lovely.
Great post! =)
~ Breezy
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Re: The Rope
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 10:19:12 AM AEST
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nicely done,
remember that old ropes still can have great strength ...
wiz |
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Re: The Rope
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by FRANCO on
Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 12:23:04 AM AEST
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it's beautifully penned, but my friend rope that is inter woven with love is stronger then time itself. GREAT WRITE,
REGARDS,
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