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someone else
Contributed by
redsleeve
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Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 01:03:48 PM in AEST
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i know you don't want me
so please just let me be
when i go with someone else
it's healthy for myself
but you always claim me quick
when its someone else i pick
you know you don't want me
so please just let me be
when i go with someone else
its healthy for myself
it hurts me to be upon your shelf
don't get me wrong
you don't know how i've longed
to be whole inside your arms
but if you know you don't want me
please, for me, just let it be
when i go with someone else
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2008-08-27 13:03:48]
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Re: someone else
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 01:07:37 PM AEST
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sounds like someone is playing a game... let it be ...
nicely done,
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Re: someone else
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 11:23:27 PM AEST
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Don'tcha just hate that? You finally get over and begin to move
forward and then you are pulled back! It's all about control,
you know?
Your plea is felt in this. Good work.
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