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Surrender
Contributed by
MomentOfHappiness
on
Friday, 29th August 2008 @ 04:12:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Surrender
Death comes upon us
Creeping like a transparent ghost
Waiting in the ecstasy of grief
To fill our hearts with despair
We never see it coming
No matter how prepared we think we are
We are all we have got
Fight the good fight
Beat the darkness back
Because it will swallow you whole
Salt the wounds, burn the nerves
I will never get you back
I fall to my knees
Hands covering my withered face
I should have saved you
Found some way
Passion to make things different
Fight the death in the night
Screaming to change things
Silent in confusion
Surrender to hope
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2008-08-29 04:12:48]
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Re: Surrender
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th August 2008 @ 09:35:50 AM AEST
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Damn, this was extremely emotive! I could feel the "wailing" inside this.
When emotion is this overwhelming, it is difficult to capture in words,
so bravo, poet. This was very well done.
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