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The Vampire
Contributed by
leannabanana
on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 12:27:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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He waits for me
He waits at night
As he chants the words i like
Gate of darkness Circle of hell
Come with me i'll weave my spell
Come, he says, come to me
Be one of us, be one of me
You know you want it
I know i'm right so come
With me and
Feel my BITE!!!!!
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leannabanana
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2008-08-30 12:27:03]
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Re: The Vampire
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 01:43:09 PM AEST
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I loved the flow in this.... really enjoyable read...
Welcome to YPDC... hope you enjoy it here..
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Re: The Vampire
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by wizard on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 03:26:09 PM AEST
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nice write,
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Re: The Vampire
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by eeeitak on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 04:13:56 PM AEST
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This is great. I always love books and movies about vampires, so I was instantly drawn to this because of the title, and you did not disappoint. Can't wait to see some more of your poems! :D
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Re: The Vampire
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st August 2008 @ 02:49:39 PM AEST
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Wow!
I am shocked at the simularities in the vampire's action to his victims kneck and the things this poem has done to my brain.
SCM |
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Re: The Vampire
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by nature360 on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 09:09:08 PM AEST
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Yes vampires are tempting.
So are lycans dragons, humans and shape-shifters.
The way you end it
'feel my bite'
sends a chill down the spine. |
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