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The Sun,The Rain,The Hope ,The Pain
Contributed by
amt
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Sunday, 31st August 2008 @ 04:59:26 PM in AEST
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it started to rain when i was playing in the sun i left the game and i started to run
i ran so hard i ran so fast i dodged the lightning i ran like mad
and i knew there's a place not so far away where the sun is still shining bright i wasn't weak to give in to the rain i knew i had to fight
i ran so hard i ran so fast i dodged the lightning and i stopped at last
now i wondered if there is really a place not so far away where the sun is still shining bright giving up doesn't always mean you are weak but strong enough to lose the fight
i was standing in the rain now feeling my skin soak each drop of it though i was getting wet all the time but now i was kind of loving it
wierd it seemed to me at first but then i started to realize the picture was crystal clear as soon as i closed my eyes
it was not the rain it was the shelter from the rain hope hurts more far more than the pain
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Re: The Sun,The Rain,The Hope ,The Pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by eeeitak on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 09:42:54 AM AEST (User
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Wow. This is absolutely incredible.
I don't even know what more to say,
but this is one of my favorite poem I've read now.
Very well done :D
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