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Again
Contributed by
navydocny
on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 02:22:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Her fingers cool, on my heated skin
So long is this, my cold chagrin
What was can be, as strong, what was
I ask at night, amongst the stars
A child-like hope, a wish is made
Too long to tell, for hope to fade
Relinquish not, fall to the fray
Her cool touch, is what I pray
That I may find my way again
To her sanctum where it all began
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2008-09-01 02:22:49]
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Re: Again
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by DukeW on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 09:47:16 AM AEST
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| Great expression of a feeling that was born of angst caused by the miss of your beloved, and your love for her. |
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Re: Again
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by wizard on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 11:11:38 AM AEST
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nice job,
sounds like you're determined not to give up hope...
wiz |
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Re: Again
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by eeeitak on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 12:58:56 PM AEST
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I love this! It's short but still complex. Great flow and rhyme scheme, you've got everything here in this poem done beautifully.
Great write :D
--Katie |
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